Posted by isaacbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 29, 2014
Ski
Excited, amazed
Freezing, snowing, falling
Ski lift, ski jump, ski trick, ski fast
Gliding, jumping, slipping
Frosty, icy
Ski Hill
Ski
Excited, amazed
Freezing, snowing, falling
Ski lift, ski jump, ski trick, ski fast
Gliding, jumping, slipping
Frosty, icy
Ski Hill
Nice job, Isaac. You stayed on track about skiing. You included some descriptive language into your poem such as: slipping, frosty, and gliding. I would have liked some different nouns than just: ski lift, ski jump etc. Keep working hard on your next writing project: the snowman story! 🙂
Great job.