Posted by annybds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on February 5, 2014
Blizzard
Chilly, blustery
Blowing, freezing, glistening
Black ice, Arctic blast, scarf, mittens
Snowing, shivering, warming
Frosty, snowy
Winter
Blizzard
Chilly, blustery
Blowing, freezing, glistening
Black ice, Arctic blast, scarf, mittens
Snowing, shivering, warming
Frosty, snowy
Winter
Good job, Anny! Your diamante poem stayed with the winter theme and your poem followed the pattern. You included some descriptive language, which helped make your poem more interesting. Great use of words such as: chilly, blustery, and glistening. As you know, winter is not my favourite season and I can picture myself shivering when it is -40 degrees Celsius with the windchill! Keep working hard on your next writing project: the snowman story! 🙂
Nice poem!! Keep up the great work:):)