Posted by jacobwbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on February 7, 2014
Hockey
Frozen, chilly
Gloves, stick, helmet
Scoring, cheering, skating
Puck, net, sticks, skates
Body checking, scoring, guarding
Smart, skilled
Hockey
Frozen, chilly
Gloves, stick, helmet
Scoring, cheering, skating
Puck, net, sticks, skates
Body checking, scoring, guarding
Smart, skilled
Great work, Jacob! Your poem stayed with the theme on hockey and you followed the diamante pattern. You used some strong descriptive language such as: skilled, guarding, and body checking. You definitely must be skilled to be a hockey player and you included great words that showed what supplies a hockey player requires when playing hockey. Keep working hard on your next writing project: the snowman story! 🙂