Posted by bds4drayden | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on April 9, 2014
Autumn
Leaves, colourful
Raking, jumping, playing
Crisp leaves, jean-jackets, bloom, flower
Warming, growing, gardening
Warm, sunny
Spring
Autumn
Leaves, colourful
Raking, jumping, playing
Crisp leaves, jean-jackets, bloom, flower
Warming, growing, gardening
Warm, sunny
Spring
Great to do an antonym poem on autumn and spring. You used some great words to describe the two different seasons such as: crisp leaves, colourful, bloom, and gardening. However, I would have liked for you to use some different word choices in your poem. You repeated the word leaves twice and warm and warming are the same words also. Keep working hard! 🙂
Thank you 🙂