Posted by jefferyf1415 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on May 13, 2015
I would keep the Truffula seed and put it in a safe place. After I found the Lorax in the deep dark hole, we decided to plant the Truffula seed. The Lorax and I would find the Bar-ba-loots in the woods, the Humming- fish in the ocean, and the Swomee-Swans in the sky. We found the animals were where we thought they were.
It took several weeks to grow the Truffula seed. The tree eventually gave more seeds. We planted more Truffula trees. The Lorax and I felt joy in or heart.
After the Truffula trees grew larger and the sky became cleaner, the Bar-ba-loots had alot of Truffula fruits, the Humming- fish had clean water and the Swomee- Swans had clean air. All the animals were happy and the Lorax and I were happy. We built a house in the Truffula forest.
Nice job on your story, Jeffery. You understand a story has a beginning, middle, and an end. It was a great idea to build a house in the Truffula forest after the Lorax and you cleaned it up. Really continue working on adding more detail to your ideas. Keep working hard! 🙂