The Case of the Missing Black Teddy Bear


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on September 29, 2016

Take a look at the exciting mystery story written using the Book Creator App.

Comments (5)

Great work, David! You did a fantastic job adding descriptive adjectives to your fill in the blank mystery story to make it more interesting, such as, “sunny day, great day of school, and black teddy bear.” You read your story clearly and with expression. You also self-corrected yourself when you realized you made an error. These are skills you need to have in order to continue to improve in your reading. Your story followed a logical sequence of events until the mystery of the missing black teddy bear was solved. I wonder how the teddy bear ended up behind the fridge too? Fantastic job using the Book Creator App for the first time. Your font colour was easy to read and your pictures related well to mystery story. Keep working hard and the terrific work! 🙂

I agree on you that he corrected his mistakes.I wish the story went smoother.I wounder how you made that.

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I enjoyed listening to your story about the black fluffy teddy bear. But I wish that you could speak up because I couldn’t really hear the story when my computer was at its max volume. How long did it take to find the teddy bear?
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I like that you had to be a detective to find out were he was. I wish you would of said the words a little louder. Why did you only make videos? Come to my blog

Hi my name is Katie and i’m 9 years old. I found this story really interesting because it was sorta a mystery to see where it was. PLease come vsit my blog I have lots of stories and I hope to see your comments there soon!!!!

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