The Case of the Missing Puppy Called Lexie

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Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on September 29, 2016

Take a look at the exciting mystery story written using the Book Creator App.

Comments (2)

Great job, Sara! You did a fantastic job adding descriptive adjectives your mystery fill in the blank story, such as, “sunny, morning bike ride, and running in the cattails.” By using descriptive adjectives this makes your story more interesting. Your story followed a logical sequence of events to solve the mystery of the missing dog, Lexie to be located under the porch. Creative name for the dog as well. You read your story clearly and with expression. Terrific job using the Book Creator App for the first time as well. Your font colour was easy to read and your pictures related well to your story. Excellent job and keep working hard! 🙂

Good story it was very entertaining and distinctive.I wish you read a little more with expression. I wounder how did you get pictures and words into a video.

I have some story’s that are just like yours that I think you will like.Come visit my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/maldonej/ or my class blog at http://blog.elanco.org/ageimanla/

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