Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on December 9, 2017
Take a look at the mystery story written by Amanda created using the Book CreatorApp. Enjoy listening to the story!
Take a look at the mystery story written by Amanda created using the Book CreatorApp. Enjoy listening to the story!
What a very unique story, Amanda. I couldn’t wait to hear what would happen to the glittery garland! I’m so glad you found it and put it in the Christmas tree. Very creative!
Great job with your mystery story, Amanda! Your story was creative by choosing to write about missing glittery garland. I like how your story related well to the Christmas theme, as you added you were coming home from a day of shopping from Santa’s Hut. Your clues followed a logical order and I was happy that you found your glittery garland to decorate the Christmas tree. Nice job adding descriptive adjectives your writing such as, glittery, gigantic, huge, and pretty. By adding descriptive adjectives to your writing makes it more interesting to the reader. You read your story fluently and your pictures related well to your story. Keep working hard, Amanda! 🙂