Santa Stuck at Christmas Time

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Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 8, 2018

Take a look at the story called, “Santa Stuck at Christmas Time,” written by Amanda created using the Book Creator App.  Enjoy listening to the story!

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Excellent job, Amanda! You demonstrated that you understand a story has a beginning, middle, and an end. You always demonstrated an understanding of proper paragraph structure. You had a topic sentence, supporting details, and a closing sentence, which all related well the ideas in your paragraph. You also used transition words in your story story such as next, then, and finally which shows you understand a paragraph must have a sequence of events. Fantastic use of descriptive adjectives in your story such as, snuggled, cozy, bubbly, soapy, and frosty. Using descriptive adjectives makes your story more interesting to the reader! I am sure Santa was happy that you helped him get out of the chimney! You read your story fluently, accurately, and with expression as well. Terrific work and I am extremely proud of how your writing has improved! Keep up the great work, Amanda! 🙂

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