Posted by bds4drayden | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 16, 2014
Hockey
Chilly, frigid
Skating, scoring, cheering
Puck, net, skill, talent
Saving, blocking, helping
Slides, saves
Goalie
Hockey
Chilly, frigid
Skating, scoring, cheering
Puck, net, skill, talent
Saving, blocking, helping
Slides, saves
Goalie
Nice job, Drayden. Your poem stayed true to the winter theme. Your poem followed the diamante poem format except, for at the end with slides and saves which are verbs, not adjectives. You used some descriptive language such as, chilly frigid, and blocking. Very creative to include words such as skill and talent, which are fantastic choices for nouns. Keep working hard on your next writing project, the snowman story. 🙂
Nice poem you got there.
Thank you!
Thank you 🙂