Posted by nancylbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 16, 2014
Skates
Icy, frigid
Slipping, gliding, sliding
Blades, laces, Zamboni, people
Polishing, skating, shivering
Skates
Icy, frigid
Slipping, gliding, sliding
Blades, laces, Zamboni, people
Polishing, skating, shivering
I love your poem because it had descriptive adjectives.
Fantastic work, Nancy! Your poem stayed true to the winter theme and followed the diamante format. You incorporated descriptive language that made your poem interesting, such as frigid, polishing, and shivering. Very creative to include the Zamboni! Keep working hard and keep up the great writing for your snowman story! 🙂