Posted by nellabds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 20, 2014
Crunchy, cold
Falling, freezing, sparkling
Chilly, slippery, crystals, Chinooks
Snowy, windy
Winter
Crunchy, cold
Falling, freezing, sparkling
Chilly, slippery, crystals, Chinooks
Snowy, windy
Winter
Great describing words! Keep up the good work.
Nice work, Nella! Your poem stayed true to the winter theme and followed the diamante poem format. Great job including descriptive language such as: crunchy and sparkling. You could have used stronger nouns to describe snow rather than chilly and slippery which are adjectives. I like how you included Chinooks into your poem as we have discussed this in Social Studies. Keep working hard and I look forward to reading your snowman story! 🙂