Posted by nancylbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 21, 2014
WINTER
Cold, frigid
Shivering, snowing, coughing
Ice, blizzard, beach, lemonade
Surfing, swimming, camping
Shady, sunny
Summer
WINTER
Cold, frigid
Shivering, snowing, coughing
Ice, blizzard, beach, lemonade
Surfing, swimming, camping
Shady, sunny
Summer
Wow!!! Amazing poem!
Keep up the great writing! 🙂
I will!!!!!
Great work, Nancy! I like how you selected to write about something you know about, the seasons. Writing about something you know makes it easier to come up with ideas. Great use of descriptive language to engage the reader such as, shivering, coughing, blizzard, and lemonade. As you know, my favourite season is summer and I could picture myself on a beach in Hawaii! 🙂 Keep up the fantastic work!
Thank you! I think I could picture myself on the beach too!