Posted by annabds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 22, 2014
Skates
White, sharp
Gliding, polishing, skating
Polished ice, blade, people, chilly
Rink
Skates
White, sharp
Gliding, polishing, skating
Polished ice, blade, people, chilly
Rink
Wow!! Nice poem. I liked how you did it about skating. I also liked your pictures.
Thank you, I liked your poem as well.
Wow Anna! I liked your poem and the pictures you put on your poem.
Thank you. You are very kind and I liked your poem as well.
Great work, Anna! Your poem stayed on topic about skating and followed the diamante pattern. However, you seemed to have missed a line in your poem. Excellent use of descriptive language such as: gliding, polishing, and slippery. These descriptive words helped me picture a skater gliding across the polished ice in her white skates! Keep working hard and keep up the creative ideas on your next writing project, the snowman story. 🙂
Well thank you Miss Vidotto.