Winter Diamante Poem


Posted by gerhardbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 22, 2014

Hockey Player

Tough, quick

Slipping, sliding, skating

Saving, protecting, guarding  

Smart, swift

                    Goalie oilerspuck

Comments (2)

Great job, Gerhard! You stayed on topic with hockey and followed the diamante poem. Nice use of descriptive language such as: guarding and tough. I really liked the adjectives you selected to describe the goalie: smart and swift, something you require to be an excellent goalie. Keep working hard! 🙂

I like your picture.

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