Posted by gerhardbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 22, 2014
Hockey Player
Tough, quick
Slipping, sliding, skating
Saving, protecting, guarding
Smart, swift
Hockey Player
Tough, quick
Slipping, sliding, skating
Saving, protecting, guarding
Smart, swift
Great job, Gerhard! You stayed on topic with hockey and followed the diamante poem. Nice use of descriptive language such as: guarding and tough. I really liked the adjectives you selected to describe the goalie: smart and swift, something you require to be an excellent goalie. Keep working hard! 🙂
I like your picture.