Winter Diamante Poem


Posted by jacobnbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 22, 2014




                Quick, speedy

       Coasting, speeding, gliding

       Mittens, boots, helmet, coat

                                                        Ramping, jumping, flying

                                                             Excited, chilly









Comments (4)

I loved your choice of describing words. Keep up the good work!

Thank you.

Great job, Jacob! You stayed on topic of winter activities and followed the diamante poem. I enjoyed your choice of descriptive language such as: coasting, speeding, gliding, and flying. This descriptive language helped me picture a skier on the slopes and a snowboarder performing tricks in the air. Keep up the great work and creative ideas for your next writing project, the snowman story! 🙂

Thank you for the nice comments.

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