Posted by jacobnbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 22, 2014
Skier
Quick, speedy
Coasting, speeding, gliding
Mittens, boots, helmet, coat
Ramping, jumping, flying
Excited, chilly
Snowboarder
Skier
Quick, speedy
Coasting, speeding, gliding
Mittens, boots, helmet, coat
Ramping, jumping, flying
Excited, chilly
Snowboarder
I loved your choice of describing words. Keep up the good work!
Thank you.
Great job, Jacob! You stayed on topic of winter activities and followed the diamante poem. I enjoyed your choice of descriptive language such as: coasting, speeding, gliding, and flying. This descriptive language helped me picture a skier on the slopes and a snowboarder performing tricks in the air. Keep up the great work and creative ideas for your next writing project, the snowman story! 🙂
Thank you for the nice comments.