Posted by peterbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 22, 2014
Hockey Players
Tough, fast
Body checking, scoring, shooting
Skates, sticks, spectators, arena
Protecting, blocking, saving
Goalie
Hockey Players
Tough, fast
Body checking, scoring, shooting
Skates, sticks, spectators, arena
Protecting, blocking, saving
Goalie
Great job. I like how you described the hockey player and I like how you made it into the diamante diamond shaped poem.
Great work, Peter! You poem stayed on track with the hockey theme and followed the diamante pattern. You used strong descriptive language such as: tough, protecting, and blocking. Keep working hard and keep up the creative ideas for your next writing project, the snowman story. 🙂