Diamante Poem

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Posted by johnnybds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 29, 2014

skier             Winter  johnny

Cold, icy

 Skating, sledding, skiing

              Snow, mittens, snowballs, snowman 

       Falling, sparkling, glistening

    White, fluffy

    Snow

Comments (4)

Good work, Johnny! Your poem stayed on track with the winter theme. You used some descriptive language such as: sparking, glistening, and fluffy. Using descriptive language helps create an image of winter and snow in the reader’s mind. Keep working hard on your next writing project: the snowman story! 🙂

I really like your poem because you had some very nice descriptive words.

Thank you!

I really like your poem.

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