Diamante Poem

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Posted by bennybds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 31, 2014

Winter

Cold, chilly

Snowing, skating, melting

Scarf, Christmas, buttons, black hat

 Singing, ice skating, dancing

Happy, funny

Frosty

  Frosty

Comments (2)

Nice diamante poem Benny. You included some descriptive language such as chilly and cold. I would like to have seen some more descriptive words, this is something you can think about for your next writing project, the snowman story. You did describe Frosty well by using words such as, dancing and happy. Keep working hard! 🙂

I like your poem because you have a very nice picture.

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