Winter Diamante Poem

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Posted by susiefbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 31, 2014

igloo        bobsledIgloo

        Sparkly, white

       Carving, snowing, living

                                             Round, door, bobsled, toboggan

           Coasting, laughing,sledding

          Hard,wooden

           Sled

Comments (1)

Nice work Susie. I liked how you selected creative items to write about such as the igloo. Your poem stayed with the winter theme and you followed the diamante pattern. Great use of descriptive language such as: coasting, carving, and wooden. I could picture kids laughing and coasting down a hill on a sled! :). Keep working hard on your next writing project: the snowman story. 🙂

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