Autumn Haiku


Posted by tinar1415 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on November 28, 2014

Leaves turn brown in fall,

swirling gently in the wind.

Winter is coming.










Comments (1)

Great work, Tina! Your poem followed the Haiku patter on 5,7,5. It was great that your poem followed the theme of leaves and then ending with winter arriving soon! Fantastic use of describing words: swirling and gently. Using descriptive adjectives helps the reader picture the leaves swirling in the wind. Keep up the great work, Tina!

Write a comment

Skip to toolbar