Posted by peterp1516 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on November 29, 2015

Leaves fall from the trees,

a chill dances in the wind.                                                          

Leaves drift in the air.


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Good work, Peter! You followed the correct syllable pattern for a Haiku poem. I liked how you kept the ideas together with the same theme – leaves. The adjectives you used such as drift and chill described Autumn well. Using descriptive adjectives helps the reader create an image in their mind. Keep working hard, Peter! 🙂

Hello, My name is Mr. Geiman and I am a 4th grade teacher at Blue Ball Elementary school in Lancaster County Pennsylvania. My student and I are very excited about blogging and enjoy reading your blog posts. If you can please visit our class blog page at


Then from the class blog page you can visit my students individual blog pages and write comments. We would love to hear from you all.

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