Leaves

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Posted by peterp1516 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on November 29, 2015

Leaves fall from the trees,

a chill dances in the wind.                                                          

Leaves drift in the air.

leaves

Comments (2)

Good work, Peter! You followed the correct syllable pattern for a Haiku poem. I liked how you kept the ideas together with the same theme – leaves. The adjectives you used such as drift and chill described Autumn well. Using descriptive adjectives helps the reader create an image in their mind. Keep working hard, Peter! 🙂

Hello, My name is Mr. Geiman and I am a 4th grade teacher at Blue Ball Elementary school in Lancaster County Pennsylvania. My student and I are very excited about blogging and enjoy reading your blog posts. If you can please visit our class blog page at

http://blog.elanco.org/ageimanla/

Then from the class blog page you can visit my students individual blog pages and write comments. We would love to hear from you all.

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