Nice work on your poem! You followed the correct syllable Haiku pattern. I like how you kept your ideas with the same theme: leaves. It’s great that you help rake leaves with your dad and it is enjoyable to jump in leaves when you are a kid! Beautiful autumn pictures! 🙂
Nice work on your poem! You followed the correct syllable Haiku pattern. I like how you kept your ideas with the same theme: leaves. It’s great that you help rake leaves with your dad and it is enjoyable to jump in leaves when you are a kid! Beautiful autumn pictures! 🙂