Good work, Peter! I like how your front cover gives the reader a hint that your poem will be about winter. Your poem followed the diamante format. You used nouns, verbs, and adjectives according to each line correctly. Your adjectives, nouns, and verbs described both seasons well. This allows the reader to understand what seasons you were discussing. Slippery and chilly are strong adjectives, as ice and snowball are strong nouns to describe winter. I can imagine the flowers blooming and butterflies flying around in the springtime after it has rained. Great job with your pictures as they showcased winter and spring well. Nice job reading your poem clearly. Looking forward to reading your snow globe writing project. Keep working hard! 🙂
Good work, Peter! I like how your front cover gives the reader a hint that your poem will be about winter. Your poem followed the diamante format. You used nouns, verbs, and adjectives according to each line correctly. Your adjectives, nouns, and verbs described both seasons well. This allows the reader to understand what seasons you were discussing. Slippery and chilly are strong adjectives, as ice and snowball are strong nouns to describe winter. I can imagine the flowers blooming and butterflies flying around in the springtime after it has rained. Great job with your pictures as they showcased winter and spring well. Nice job reading your poem clearly. Looking forward to reading your snow globe writing project. Keep working hard! 🙂