Good work, Dylan! I like how your front cover showcased the tree in winter and tree in summer. A creative idea to let the reader know what your poem is about. Your poem followed the diamante format. You used nouns, verbs, and adjectives according to each line correctly. Your adjectives, nouns, and verbs described both seasons well. This allows the reader to understand what seasons you were discussing. Snowball and frosted trees are strong nouns to describe winter, as were, sand castles and beach ball to describe summer. Great job with your pictures as they showcased summer and winter well. Nice job reading your poem clearly. Looking forward to reading your snow globe writing project. Keep working hard! 🙂
Good work, Dylan! I like how your front cover showcased the tree in winter and tree in summer. A creative idea to let the reader know what your poem is about. Your poem followed the diamante format. You used nouns, verbs, and adjectives according to each line correctly. Your adjectives, nouns, and verbs described both seasons well. This allows the reader to understand what seasons you were discussing. Snowball and frosted trees are strong nouns to describe winter, as were, sand castles and beach ball to describe summer. Great job with your pictures as they showcased summer and winter well. Nice job reading your poem clearly. Looking forward to reading your snow globe writing project. Keep working hard! 🙂