Good work, Tina! Your poem followed the diamante format. You used nouns, verbs, and adjectives according to each line correctly. Your adjectives, nouns, and verbs described both seasons well. This allows the reader to understand what seasons you were discussing. Blizzard is a great noun to describe winter, as was, vacation to describe summer. Also, who doesn’t enjoy tanning in the summer? Great job with your pictures as they showcased summer and winter well. You read your poem clearly. I like how you added, “Thanks for watching,” at the end of your poem. Looking forward to reading your snow globe writing project. Keep working hard! 🙂
Good work, Tina! Your poem followed the diamante format. You used nouns, verbs, and adjectives according to each line correctly. Your adjectives, nouns, and verbs described both seasons well. This allows the reader to understand what seasons you were discussing. Blizzard is a great noun to describe winter, as was, vacation to describe summer. Also, who doesn’t enjoy tanning in the summer? Great job with your pictures as they showcased summer and winter well. You read your poem clearly. I like how you added, “Thanks for watching,” at the end of your poem. Looking forward to reading your snow globe writing project. Keep working hard! 🙂