Good work, Eva! I like how you continued to revise your poem until it followed the same theme and correct cinquain syllable pattern. This is an excellent trait to have as a student. You wrote about my favourite topic: chocolate! 🙂 I can imagine unwrapping the chocolate kisses and tasting the delicious chocolate melt in my mouth. I look forward to reading your snow globe story. Keep working hard! 🙂
Good work, Eva! I like how you continued to revise your poem until it followed the same theme and correct cinquain syllable pattern. This is an excellent trait to have as a student. You wrote about my favourite topic: chocolate! 🙂 I can imagine unwrapping the chocolate kisses and tasting the delicious chocolate melt in my mouth. I look forward to reading your snow globe story. Keep working hard! 🙂