What Am I Haiku?

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Posted by 1516paulinad | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on March 18, 2016

What am I Haiku?

By: Paulina                                                         

I shine in the sky.
Among the dark stormy clouds.

After it has rained.

Click the picture to reveal the answer!

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Comments (2)

Great work, Paulina! Your Haiku poem followed the correct syllable pattern. To describe your object you selected descriptive language such as: shine and stormy. Your descriptive clues help the reader guess your St. Patrick’s Day object. Also, I’m impressed you used the word among as this is not a word often used in daily discussions. Your font colour was easy to read and the, “Happy St. Patrick’s Day,” picture to click on was unique. Keep up the fantastic work, Paulina! 🙂

Good writing Paulina. Your haiku was very interesting and made me think. I like your pictures you used and the colors you choose. Keep up the good work. Miss Graumans

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