The Case of Missing Christmas Present


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on September 23, 2016

Take a look at the exciting mystery story written using the Book Creator App.

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Good work, Judy! You added descriptive detail your mystery fill in the blank story such as, “sunny, enormous, and early morning walk.” Adding description to your story makes it more interesting. I like how you used other words to describe the Christmas present such as, “surprise present, special present, and celebration in box.” This was a great use of synonyms. Your mystery story followed a logical sequence of events in order to solve the case of the missing Christmas present. I wonder why such an important present would be in the bathroom by the stinky garbage? I like how you added the summer about your story at the end, just like a real book. You read your story clearly and with expression. Nice job using the Book Creator for the first time. Your font colour was easy to read and your pictures related well to your story. Fantastic work and keep working hard! 🙂

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