The Case of the Missing Black Teddy Bear


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on September 26, 2016

Take a look at the exciting mystery story written using the Book Creator App.


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Good work, Annie! Your mystery fill in the blank story had descriptive adjectives such as, “sunny, great, black teddy bear, and birthday present.” Adding detail to your story makes it more interesting. Your mystery story followed a logical sequence of events in order to solve the case of the missing black teddy bear. I like how you added detail such as the pink and blue toy box. I am glad you found the black teddy bear, since it was a present from your grandma. You read your story clearly and with expression. Great job using the Book Creator App for the first time. Your font colour was easy to read and your pictures related well to your story. Keep up the fantastic work and keep working hard! 🙂

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