The Case of the Missing Orange Teddy Bear


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on September 27, 2016

Take a look at the exciting mystery story written using theΒ Book Creator App.

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Good work, David! Your mystery fill in the blank story contained descriptive adjectives such as,”sunny, orange teddy bear, and fluffy,” makes your story more interesting. Your mystery story followed a logical sequence of events in order for the case of the missing orange teddy bear to be solved. I like the detail you added such as the brown dresser, red toy box, and lastly where the teddy bear was found beneath a big brown box against the wall. This helps the reader visualize these places when reading your story. You read your mystery story clearly. Nice work using the Book Creator App for the first time. Your font colour was easy to read and your pictures related well to your story. Keep up the fantastic work and keep working hard! πŸ™‚

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