The Case of the Missing German Shepherd Puppy Duke


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on December 7, 2017

Take a look at the mystery story written by Andrew created using the Book Creator App.   Enjoy listening to the story!





Comments (2)

Detective Andrew, glad you solved the mystery. It was so interesting to read and hear your story because you tried to put in quite a few details. It was nice to have Duke be your favourite buddy because a dog is a great friend!

Great job being a detective Andrew and solving the mystery! Your story followed a logical order of clues and the details you added made your story interesting to read. I like how you added why Duke was precious to you by telling the reader it was a Christmas present from your parents. This makes the reader really want you to find your favourite buddy, Duke! I am sure happy you found Duke beneath the bathroom shelf. You read your story fluently and with expression. Your pictures related well to your story and your font was easy to read. Keep working hard, Andrew! 🙂

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