The Case of Missing White Rabbit Named Scarlett


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on December 9, 2017

Take a look at the mystery story written by Nela created using the Book CreatorApp.   Enjoy listening to the story!

Comments (2)

Great story, Nela! Your story moved along well from having a mystery to being able to solve it. Using the word, cuddly to describe a pet rabbit makes me wish I could pet one right away!

Nice job solving your mystery, Nela! I like how you included descriptive words in your story such as sunny, marvellous, gigantic and cuddly. By adding descriptive adjectives makes our story more interesting to the reader. Your clues followed logical order, but I was worried when you found white fur in the living room! I was happy that you found your pet rabbit hiding behind the couch! You read your story with expression and your pictures related well to your story. Scarlett is a great name for a rabbit! Keep working hard, Nela! 🙂

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