The Case of Missing Black and Brown Purse

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Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on December 12, 2017

Take a look at the mystery story written by Aggie created using the Book CreatorApp.  Enjoy listening to the story!

Comments (2)

Nice work, Detective Aggie! The beads you found as a clue made me worry that your precious necklaces were broken. I’m glad they weren’t! I like that you explained why your purse was so precious.

Fantastic job, Aggie! Nice job adding descriptive detail to your writing such as, sunny and black and brown purse. I am glad you found your precious black and brown purse and that your sister, Eva did not break your precious necklaces from your grandma! Your pictures related well to your story and you read your story with expression. Keep working hard, Aggie! 🙂

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