The Case of the Missing Blue Bear Sparkle


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on December 12, 2017

Take a look at the mystery story written by Anna created using the Book CreatorApp.  Enjoy listening to the story!

Comments (2)

Oh, my, Anna! Very interesting story. I was worried when you found the blue fur. Do you think it was cut or pulled out? I was so glad Sparkle was found. That’s a lovely name for your bear!

Great job, Anna on your mystery story! Your clues followed a logical order and I am glad you found your blue bear, Sparkle! It is great that you are adding descriptive adjectives to your writing such as blue bear, pink striped rug, humongous hug, fluffy, and sparkly eyes. Using descriptive language makes your story more interesting to the reader. Your pictures related well to your story and you read your story with expression! Keep working hard, Anna! 🙂

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