The Case of the Missing Precious Kitten Named Notch


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on December 12, 2017

Take a look at the mystery story written by David created using the Book CreatorApp.  Enjoy listening to the story!

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David, I could tell that Notch was very precious to you by your descriptive writing. I’m glad you got to give Notch an enormous hug after you found him in the blue, fluffy bed! Great work!

Great work, David on your mystery story! You read your story with expression and by doing this, you showed how precious Notch was to you. It was great to see that you tried to add descriptive adjectives to your story such as blue, fluffy bed, lime green striped leash, and an enormous hug. The use of descriptive adjectives makes your writing more interesting to the reader. I am extremely happy you found your precious kitten! Keep working hard, David! 🙂

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