The Case of the Missing White Bike


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on December 13, 2017

Take a look at the mystery story written by Benny created using the Book CreatorApp.  Enjoy listening to the story!

Comments (2)

I enjoyed your mystery, Benny. You were skilful at using details to create suspense. I was glad there was a happy ending!

Great work, Benny. Your mystery story contained practical clues, as to where your missing bike may be. In addition, I like that you are trying to add detail to your writing, such as, white bike. I am glad you found your bike in storage room. Keep working on adding expression when you are reading. Although, your story was about a bike, you could have included a few pictures that were not bikes. Keep working hard, Benny! 🙂

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