Santa Stuck in my Chimney


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 17, 2018

Take a look at the story called, “Santa Stuck in my Chimney,” written by Ben created using the Book Creator App.  Enjoy listening to the story!

Comments (1)

Good work, Ben! You understand a story needs a beginning, middle, and end. With continued focus on paragraph structure this term, your topic sentence, supporting details, and closing sentence will continue to improve. Your story demonstrated several ways to help get Santa out of the chimney. I am sure Santa was glad that your last idea of using a rope worked! You need to continue working on making your sentences more complex, by adding more descriptive detail to them. You read your story fluently, accurately, and with expression. Keep working hard, Ben!

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