Santa Stuck in the Chimney


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 17, 2018

Take a look at the story called, “Santa Stuck in the Chimney,” written by Benny created using the Book Creator App.  Enjoy listening to the story!

Comments (1)

Good work, Benny! You understand a story needs a beginning, middle, and an end. You demonstrated an understanding of topic sentences, supporting details, and a closing sentence. With continued work with paragraph structure, your understanding will continue to improve. You had logical ideas to get Santa out of the chimney. I am sure Santa was relieved our last idea of using melted butter worked! Continue working on adding transition words such as first, next, then, and finally as this will help you keep your ideas organized in your paragraph. You read your story accurately and fluently. Keep working hard, Benny!

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