Santa is Stuck


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 19, 2018

Take a look at the story called, “Santa is Stuck,” written by John created using the Book Creator App.  Enjoy listening to the story!


Comments (1)

Good work, John! You understand that a story needs a beginning, middle, and an end. You need to continue working on adding more descriptive details to make your writing more interesting. You used logical ideas to help get Santa out of the chimney. You had logical ideas to help get Santa out of the chimney and I am sure Santa was relieved that your idea of using a rope to pull him out of the chimney worked. Nice job reading your story fluently and accurately. However, you said sticked instead of stuck. Keep working hard, John! 🙂

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