Our Grade Four Class Blog The Case of the Curious Classroom 

Excellent job, Judy! You understand a story needs a beginning, middle, and an end. Your story included transition words which are important as they signal to the reader a new event is about to take place. Your story included descriptive adjectives which makes your story more interesting to the reader. I am glad Lily the Fox found the Easter Bunny. I am sure he needed his rest before delivering all of the Easter eggs to the children. You read your story fluently, accurately, and with expression. Your pictures related well to your story. Be sure that your background selections don’t affect the ability of the reader to read your story. Your writing has shown tremendous improvement since the beginning of the year! Proud of you, Judy! Keep working hard, Judy and terrific job on your Easter story. 🙂