Our Grade Four Class Blog The Case of the Curious Classroom 

Excellent job, Martha! You understand a story needs a beginning, middle, and an end. You included transition words which are important as they signal to the reader that a new event is about to take place. I like the detail you included into each paragraph, as well as, the descriptive adjectives. This makes your story more interesting to read. Your idea was creative by having the Easter Bunny trip and injure his ear. I am glad that Kate found the Easter Bunny and he was able to deliver the eggs to all of the children. You read your story fluently, accurately, and with expression. Your pictures related well to your story. Your font selections and colours, as well as, your background selections made your story easy to read. Your writing has shown tremendous improvement since the beginning of the year! Keep working hard, Martha and terrific job on your Easter story! 🙂