Our Grade Four Class Blog The Case of the Curious Classroom 

Excellent job, Ricky! You understand a story needs a beginning, middle, and an end. You included transition words to signal to the reader that a new event is about to happen. Your writing includes descriptive details and adjectives, which makes your writing, more interesting to read. Your story was creative and I am sure Jairo the Fox was surprised when the Easter Bunny landed on the ground with his parachute. The Easter Bunny must be really brave to take a break by going sky diving! Good thing he didn’t injure himself! The children would have been upset if they didn’t receive their Easter eggs! You read your story fluently, accurately, and with expression. Your pictures related well to your story. Your font selections and colours, as well as, your background selections made your story easy to read. Your writing has shown tremendous improvement since the beginning of the year! Proud of you, Ricky! Keep working hard and terrific job on your Easter story! 🙂