The Easter Bunny is Missing!


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on May 3, 2019

Take a look at the mystery story called, “The Easter Bunny is Missing,” created by Isack using, “Book Creator.” Enjoy!  🙂

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Great work, Isack! You understand a story needs a beginning, middle, and an end. You included transition words to signal to the reader that a new event was about to take place. Continue working on adding descriptive adjectives to your writing to make it more interesting to the ready. Your idea was creative that the Easter Bunny lost track of time playing soccer. Good thing Bear found him just in time to deliver the Easter eggs to all of the children! You read your story fluently and accurately. Continue working on reading with more expression. Your font selection and colours, as well as, your background selections made it easy to read. Your writing has improved since the beginning of the year! Proud of you, Isack! Keep working hard and great job on your Easter story! 🙂

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