The Easter Bunny is Missing


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on May 9, 2019

Take a look at the mystery story called, “The Easter Bunny is Missing,” created by Melissa using, “Book Creator.” Enjoy!  🙂

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Excellent job, Melissa! You understand a story needs a beginning, middle, and an end. You included transition words to signal to the reader that a new event is about to happen. Your writing includes descriptive details and adjectives, which makes your writing, more interesting to read. Your story was creative and I am glad Bear found the Easter Bunny. You read your story fluently, accurately, and with expression. Your pictures related well to your story. Your font selections and colours, as well as, your background selections made your story easy to read. Your writing has shown tremendous improvement since the beginning of the year! Proud of you, Melissa! Keep working hard and terrific job on your Easter story! 🙂

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