Posted by hermantbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 22, 2014
Tough, quick
Hard working, fast thinking, scoring
Helmet, kneepads, skates, stick
Protecting, saving, guarding
Smart, swift
Goalie
Tough, quick
Hard working, fast thinking, scoring
Helmet, kneepads, skates, stick
Protecting, saving, guarding
Smart, swift
Goalie
Great Job!
Great job. I liked how you described the hockey player.
Nice job, Herman! You stayed on topic with hockey and followed the diamante pattern. Nice job with your descriptive language such as: fast thinking, protecting, saving, and tough. I liked the flow of your poem and how your words related well to each topic. Keep working hard and keep up the creative ideas for your next writing project, the snowman story! 🙂
Thank you!