Winter Diamante Poem


Posted by hermantbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 22, 2014

hockey playerhockey player                         Hockey Player

Tough, quick

Hard working, fast thinking, scoring

Helmet, kneepads, skates, stick

Protecting, saving, guarding

                          Smart, swift


Comments (4)

Great Job!

Great job. I liked how you described the hockey player.

Nice job, Herman! You stayed on topic with hockey and followed the diamante pattern. Nice job with your descriptive language such as: fast thinking, protecting, saving, and tough. I liked the flow of your poem and how your words related well to each topic. Keep working hard and keep up the creative ideas for your next writing project, the snowman story! 🙂

Thank you!

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