Winter Diamante Poem


Posted by isaacbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on January 29, 2014


             Excited, amazed        

           Freezing, snowing, falling

       Ski lift, ski jump, ski trick, ski fast

  Gliding, jumping, slipping

  Frosty, icy

    Ski Hill  


Comments (2)

Nice job, Isaac. You stayed on track about skiing. You included some descriptive language into your poem such as: slipping, frosty, and gliding. I would have liked some different nouns than just: ski lift, ski jump etc. Keep working hard on your next writing project: the snowman story! 🙂

Great job.

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