Posted by nellabds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on March 5, 2014
I hope you enjoy reading my story and my paint roller snow woman I made in Art class!
One cold morning Nella went outside to the backyard. As soon as Nella was in the
backyard she rolled three different sized snowballs and put them on top of each other. Nella went into the house and got a carrot, different types of buttons, scarf and a hat. When Nella had everything she needed she went back into the backyard. Nella placed the carrot on the snow woman for the nose, the buttons on the middle sized snow woman, and wrapped the scarf around the snow woman’s neck. Lastly, Nella placed the black hat on thesnow woman’s head. Nella named the snow woman Eva. After Nella finished the snow woman she took a step back and thought the snow woman looked great and happy.
Nella went inside and had some lunch. Soon Nella heard a voice calling, “Hey I’m lonely!” “Could someone please come and play with me?” Eva remarked “I’ll play with you as soon as I’m done eating my lunch!” Nella called. “Okay, “Eva replied. As soon as Nella was done she went outside to play with the snow woman. When Nella got to the spot she had built her snow woman she wasn’t there. Nella looked all around. She saw Eva by a pile of snow and asked, “What are you doing?” “Oh I’m building a snow fort,” announced Eva. “Can I help you with making the fort?” Nella commanded. “Sure,” Eva remarked. Eva and Nella worked hard to finish the fort. They went inside and made a table and two chairs for them two sit on to have a snack. Nella went inside to get two snack bars for their snack.
When they finished their snack Eva asked, “Do you want to have a snowball fight? We can pick a different tree to hide behind?” “Sure as soon as I put the dishes back in the house from our snack,” Nella responded. When they both were at a different tree, Nella and Eva both picked up some snow and rolled it into a ball and threw it at each other. When they were tired, they stopped having their snowball fight.
After, Nella went to the shed and got two shovels for them to make another snow pile and slide down the hill. They tried to get all of the bumps out of the pile. Soon Nella looked at the sky and remarked, “I better go to bed because it’s getting dark and I have to go to school tomorrow.” “Okay,” Eva replied. So Nella went inside, but before she did she gave Eva a hug. Then she went inside and went into her warm and cozy bed and fell asleep. While she was asleep she had a dream about what Eva and she would do the next day!
The End
Very good story! I enjoyed reading about your day with your snow women. 🙂
Great work, Nella! I liked the activities you did with your snow women. Very creative to make table and chairs in the snow fort. I like how you explained what you did with Eva, like hiding behind the tree when you had the snowball fight. Great job using other words than, “said,” when Eva and Nella were talking. Remember next time try to limit the amount of conversation you have in your story. Great ending by not having Eva not melt, but rather Nella dreaming about what she would do with her snow woman the next day! Keep up the hard and great work! 🙂